Thursday, September 8, 2011

Procedural Writing

How to Make Jelly


Goal: To make jelly


Ingredients:



  • Spoon


  • Bowl


  • Jelly Sachet


  • Hot Water


  • Measuring Cup

Method




  1. Rip the top of the jelly sachet off.


  2. Pour the jelly sachet into a bowl.


  3. Tip 2 cups of hot water into the bowl.


  4. Mix with a spoon untill the sachet has dissolved.


  5. Put the bowl into the fridge and let it set for 2 hours.


  6. Get the bowl out of the fridge and then enjoy.

I can write my steps in order and I have got the ingrediants so you know what you need.



I need to work on to keep using topic related words.



Tuesday, September 6, 2011

My Mini Speech

This is my mini speech video.


I have a clear voice when I am speaking.


I need to work on using more eye contact.


Monday, September 5, 2011

Recount Writing

This is a sample of my recount writing.